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Sarah Pass

  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: I'm on a Boat

    This is awesome! I know you had to get an A on this! It was brilliantly written. My philosophy teacher would absolutely love this. I don't make it a habit ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Apocalypse: Prologue

    I can't wait to read your first chapter! This was an excellent prologue I really enjoyed reading it and couldn't get enough. There was just one nit pick though. which ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Redemption (Is in a Smile)

    This was a really nice poem. I love the message of it, and the fact that you don't over use the title. It's simple but not overly simple and its ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Happy

    This defiantly put a smile on my face! This was such a cute poem! It is way different from most of the things I read and defiantly refreshing. I thought ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Christians' Lie

    All I can say simply is that, that was brilliant.

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: deleted

    For a minute I didn't know who you were talking about, I could be wrong but I think you should make it clear sooner who you were referring to. I ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)

    That was hilarious! I absolutely loved it!

    Apr 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Losing the Talent to Write

    I loved this poem! Probably every writer can relate to this. Its so true, and I wish it never stopped. I do think it ended a bit abruptly but other ...

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Life not Lived

    This was a great poem! It was so deep it took my breath away. It was inspiring and people in that kind of situation would feel encouraged and would really ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Hurt To Love You (revised)

    I love it! Its completely perfect! I'm so honored that you listened to my critics and changed it.

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Weakness

    This is a very good poem! I loved it!

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dead Among the Monkey Bars

    That was so deep! I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work!

    Nov 12, 2009


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