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Re: I'm on a Boat
This is awesome! I know you had to get an A on this! It was brilliantly written. My philosophy teacher would absolutely love this. I don't make it a habit ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: The Apocalypse: Prologue
I can't wait to read your first chapter! This was an excellent prologue I really enjoyed reading it and couldn't get enough. There was just one nit pick though. which ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Redemption (Is in a Smile)
This was a really nice poem. I love the message of it, and the fact that you don't over use the title. It's simple but not overly simple and its ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: The Happy
This defiantly put a smile on my face! This was such a cute poem! It is way different from most of the things I read and defiantly refreshing. I thought ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: The Christians' Lie
All I can say simply is that, that was brilliant.
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: deleted
For a minute I didn't know who you were talking about, I could be wrong but I think you should make it clear sooner who you were referring to. I ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)
That was hilarious! I absolutely loved it!
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Losing the Talent to Write
I loved this poem! Probably every writer can relate to this. Its so true, and I wish it never stopped. I do think it ended a bit abruptly but other ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: The Life not Lived
This was a great poem! It was so deep it took my breath away. It was inspiring and people in that kind of situation would feel encouraged and would really ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: I Hurt To Love You (revised)
I love it! Its completely perfect! I'm so honored that you listened to my critics and changed it.
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: My Weakness
This is a very good poem! I loved it!
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Dead Among the Monkey Bars
That was so deep! I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work!
Nov 12, 2009
